You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Congratulate him/her for also being accepted. -Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate. -Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together.
Dear Quinn,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am so glad to hear that the college has accepted you to study further
in Paris. I was initially
worried when I heard back from the college, and they did not respond to you. Now, I am so pleased that we can pursue our dream of going abroad to study especially together.
I was thinking we could be roommates over there as we have been best friends since grade 5th, and we know each other's preferences well. We are also
on the same course so it will not only be more convenient for our academics but also
for our personal lives as well.
Since childhood, we have always wanted to stay and study together, and this
is the best opportunity to fulfill
our dreams. We can help each other not only during our studies but Change the spelling
fulfil
also
in household chores. In abroad, it can be hard to live alone so, I believe it is better if we can stay together and have fun with each other.
Looking forward to catching up soon and until then
, take care.
Best Regards,
Shelby.Submitted by maangaganpreet51 on
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task achievement
Include specific examples of activities you could do together in Paris to enrich the content.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a clear main idea to enhance understanding.
task achievement
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used, contributing to the overall friendliness of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Congratulations and invitation to be roommates are naturally integrated into the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite