Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
Over the
last
two or three decades, electronic idems' sales ratio has been raising more tremendously, especially in mobiles and laptops than ever before due to the invention of technology. As a result
, some mankind is addicted to buying these products
enormously. I
I partially agree with Correct pronoun usage
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this
statement and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, buying new gadgets continuously by affectionate about that particular items can provide a
plenty of benefits. Mankind can be used Remove the article
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an
updated version features when they buy a new brand, so they improve their technological skills. At present, these Correct article usage
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products
have all technical
features it contains, so humankind has a chance to know about Correct article usage
the technical
that
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them
For example
, in western countries, people always change their mobiles when a new model comes in
the market. Change preposition
on
Then
numerous humankind is fond of purchasing these products
for their interests.
On the other hand
, these can lead to spending more capitals
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capital
of
buying new models continuously, Change preposition
on
thus
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is less than spending money on that. Add an article
the period
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In addition
, these kinds of products
need for communicating, but today's mankind has become materialistic which means they addicted
to buying a new brand and model. Add a missing verb
are addicted
For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 60% of the Indians are being addicted to buying new mobiles and laptops as well as spending a
plethora Remove the article
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money
on that. Change preposition
of money
Then
people are fond of purchasing these goods are negative things.
To conclude, when all things considered
, I am convinced that these both have some positives as well as negatives Add a missing verb
are considered
such
as knowing updated technical skills is the positives; being addiction
and spending huge money is the negatives. Replace the word
addicted
Hence
, I partially agree with that statement and I believe that humankind should have innumerable awarenesses about the materialistic.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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