Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Robert. The purpose of writing
this
letter is to provide the reply to your endorsement which was published yesterday 10 September. As per the requirement for fixing the issues of ceiling fan and washing machine. So I knew how to fix
this
issue it can be solved in a single day at your own residence. I have two years of experience in repairing electric gadgets
additionally
now I am an international student here so for making some money in my
next
vacation I would like to inform you that kindly accepts it and
also
give your response on the same. As mentioned in the advertisement you need assistance
next
summer i.e, during my vacation period
hence
I will be available at that time before
this
semester exams will be there so I am not available prior to two months of
this
work. An open line of communication on
this
matter will greatly help out and I am looking forward to hearing from you. thank you. Regards, Robert
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