All education should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.
It is often suggested that government should focus on giving opportunities to all people to be educated. From my point of view, I strongly agree that the benefit of giving free education, which includes spreading opportunity and improving society, outweigh the apparent of uncontrolled by the government. I will explain my reasons in
this
essay.
One of the main reasons for giving everyone free education is poverty. In many parts of the world, without money, they do not have a chance to access good education. This
situation made the worst because they finally
end up uneducated. The result in people could develop bad habits because they can not make money for a living which leads to the crime rate which has been confirmed by recent research in Thailand.Submitted by parupatp on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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