Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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, I strongly disagree about that idea because

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went there every year and they can catch the market with mastered

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will not vanish inhabitant culture because they can be blended for daily activity. Both of them can be used for student subject for study, without

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. They successfully use it and become

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and local languages can be used together without

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of dying out. In conclusion, in many countries which have

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rate of

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fluency can maintain local languages to

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as increase of communities economic and education.

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