Some people say that advertising is extremely succesful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is considered that advertising is a good marketing tool in attracting

customers

to buy the goods being promoted.

However

, others claimed that

this

method is too redundant to a point that

people

would not notice about them. In my opinion,

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can be effective if they are created while taking into account their

target

consumers’ preferences, while it might not work if the promotions are designed without clearly defined objectives. Often,

advertisements

work because they promote stuff that

people

already have the intention to buy. To make it clear, marketers

target

and promote to the right

customers

. With the help of current technology, internet browsers or apps can even trace the

customers

’ wants (by their search history),

hence

it makes things easier for businesses to reach out to their potential buyers.

For example

, if you want to buy a traditional dress for your upcoming Eid celebration, you will search for them online. The

thing you know, all

advertisements

from shops selling the dresses start to pop out

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your Instagram, Facebook or even Google.

This

method works because

people

already want to buy one and promotions give them one

last

push before they make the purchase.

On the other hand

, some

advertisements

do not work because they are too plain and boring to a point that

people

would not notice the

items

that the marketers are trying to promote. Some promotional

items

use the same kind of design every time. The reason being is that they do not put enough creativity to change their designs, commercials, and whatnot, to give a hook to the viewers so that they want to at least look at the

items

being promoted.

For example

, if a company keeps on promoting 100

items

using one same design template, it will not catch

people

’s attention and the promotional effort will just go

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waste. In my opinion,

advertisements

will only be successful if the marketers know who their

target

customers

are, study the behaviours and interests these

customers

exhibit and create promotional materials that will hit the right note with their specific audience. If none of these

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being carefully done, the promotions will just become meaningless. In conclusion, not all

advertisements

are effective to get

people

buy

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the stuff. But with thoughtful curated promotional

items

specifically to

target

relevant

customers

advertisements

can be a very good investment to companies

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5Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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promote
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Fully explain your ideas

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