Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments againts offenders To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

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due to humans

have

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always been harmful to flora and fauna.

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led to increasing global

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for humankind.

Although

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issue is being addressed by some organizations worldwide,

this

problem is not being managed because of authority according to some crowd. I agree with

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point of view, and I will explain why with samples in more

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following.

Firstly

, fossil fuels are one of the major causes of pollution as it gives rise to many disasters in the environment. For

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instant, exhaust fumes caused by vehicles we use daily are detrimental.

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cause many diseases in the community

such

as lung cancer in the long term.

Secondly

, for some people, to get warm in their house, they consume heating fuel which is used in thermal power plants,

such

as coal. Sadly, It results in air pollution and

this

endangers our

generations.

On the other hand

, more and more international organizations flourishing in recent years. These organizations funded by governments around the world are raising awareness to stop environmental problems against offenders.

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, mainstream media controlled by

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should take more a step to stop pollution made by individuals.

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, they are supposed to spend more time on their newscast about environmental issues on TV.

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can make progress to public awareness and the community may force authorities to take precautions. In conclusion, the environmental

complication

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interest everyone who wants to preserve nature and surroundings.

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some people think rule' measures are insufficient to maintain the natural balance, It can tackle

this

problem not only by law but

also

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