With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In recent times, the

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aspect is believed to surprisingly

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and

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to the saving of millions of people in the world, especially the aged,resulting in the rise of elderly people.

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, I opine that the public does not have the ability to shoulder the responsibility of taking

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of the seniors but some of the solutions may be feasible if they can . There is no room for doubt that the deficiency in the national budget does not pave the way for the attraction to the elderly,

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a lot of thorny issues ranging from

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to pollution that Vietnam has to deal with.

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,

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crude calculations of Vnexpress, governmental authorities have spent approximately 10 billion Vietnam dong for the program of cleaning the To Lich River and other polluted rivers in the North.

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, in the attempt to change our country from a pure

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country to an industrial one, the government mainly put emphasis on the school curriculums of children and adolescents, who are the hopes of the nation.

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, the problems related to the old are trivial since they are no longer in the age of labouring and dedicating

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the development of the state, leading to

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decrease in local expenditures that are not enough to take

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of them.

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, there are some viable ways that the public can take

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of elderly dwellers.

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the governments should enforce a favourable policy to encourage

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old people to examine their health at least once a month. It is true that their health is not as strong as the young so they run a high risk of contracting a lot of dangerous diseases

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as heart attack and diabetes.

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, having a check at the hospital is essential.

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their pension should be increased to a higher extent. For the reasons aforementioned,

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society hardly looks after every elderly citizen so it is ideal to give them an amount of money to take

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of themselves on their own and enjoy their old age.

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, families should spend more time confessing to their parents and grandparents, which tightens the relationships. In conclusion,

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the public does not have the capacity to look after the seniors on account of the lack of beneficial resources, some ways can be suitable to make them feel more relaxed and healthy.