Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Language
has always played an increasingly important role in our lives and we can not
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of
this
importance unless living in a
country
where we are not familiar with its
Language
. It is suggested that without
this
skill we can face
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a great number of difficulties in our social lives. I am completely in agreement with the above-said view and will discuss three domains that we might experience struggles
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living abroad in
this
essay.
First
,
language
has always been viewed as the essential medium of communication.
In addition
, communicating with other
people
is
also
an integral part of surviving in a community.
Consequently
, we are not going to survive without
undrestanding
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understanding
the
language
that is
being spoken in the place
that
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we are residing. To illustrate, we need to speak and interact with local
people
to buy the basic ingredients of our lunch.
Moreover
, humans can not live without friends and chatting with them is a fundamental domain of friendship.
Second
, working had been viewed as a responsibility of one of
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members for a long time but recently
people
are taking a fresh look at it. Nowadays all
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family
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members have a tendency to work outside not only due to
finantial
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financial
difficulties but
also
due to the modern perspective toward unemployed ones.
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Subsequently
, it might be feasible in past not to know a foreign
language
and live in another
country
while
for
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your spouse is earning money but these days everybody
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expected to have a job to be counted as a society member. It is crystally clear that you need to speak their
language
for being hired in their companies.
Last
but not the least, most of
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are being taught in the
country
's own
language
.
Although
spending time watching television might be preferable to studying, it suffers from the disadvantages that isolated you from the community. The
competetive
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competitive
environment of the twentieth century is forcing
people
to educate themselves continuously.
For instance
, to be a better cook you need to know how to use
the
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modern instruments and these
instructures
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structures
instructors
in structures
are being taught in that
country
's words. To sum up, the most important part of immigration is dealing with the new
language
and getting along with our new home is implausible without knowing it. I believe that for being a part of the new community we need to communicate, study, and work which all need us to
speake
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speak
fluently.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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