These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
It is true that there are becoming more and more housefathers to take
care
of children
while mothers bring home the bacon. In my opinion, I believe that this
way has both pros and cons.
The main reason that results in this
phenomenon is the progress of the world. It is because the public broke their stereotype, which is mothers should look after children
and fathers
should earn money. Thus
, fathers
and mothers can change their roles in recent life. In addition
, there are more women having the ability to get a high salaried job to support their family. For example
, a female CEO whose salary or income is enough to raise a family. In this
case, this
woman’s partner does not need to have his own income instead
he can take care
of their children
at home.
The outcomes of fathers
taking care
of their children
have both advantages and disadvantages. One of the benefits is women can maintain their social positions and keep improving themselves. For men, they can teach their children
some skills that female people seldom do well. On the other hand
, the disadvantage of fathers
taking care
of their children
is some details fathers
may not care
about. For example
, it is essential to keep the environment clean or without dust. Because children
always eat their toys and climb on the ground. If fathers
have not noticed this
, it will make their children
get sick easily.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I am on the fence. This
is because I believe that no matter who takes care
of their children
, he or she will try their best to give them a comprehensive love.Submitted by ru8m6512 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
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