"Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell them what they need to bring tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting warn them about some things that might be challenging"

Dear Ash, I remembered that you will be visiting me for your summer vacation, as planned

last

year. So I felt the need to inform you about certain things related to your visit.

Therefore

, you could be well-prepared and have fun with your family during your holidays. I would like to inform you about the temperature in the states is still recording under 20 degrees. It will be better to pack your winter clothing along with a heavy boot to help you walk in the snow. We would be travelling to Alaska to enjoy mountain skiing, hope you are ready for the thrilling ride. Do not worry about the safety standards, you will be thoroughly protected at any cost. I need to share with you vital information about the food in Alaska, you will not find many options for vegetarians.

Also

, most of the foods will be topped with cheese or butter which might not taste as well as you imagine. Looking forward to spending time with you and your family. with love, Surya

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

174 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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