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The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause? How can these problems be solved?

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Relocation the mass of
people
 to big
cities
 for work reasons is raised in
last
 decades.
This
 essay will discuss what the problems consist of
this
 phenomenon and the ways of
resolving
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. Nowadays, the population of
cities
 all over the world is growing very fast. Individuals are moving there for different causes.
Firstly
, it is because of work opportunities. There is a big range of options in what sphere of activities the person could get a job.
For instance
, services. Like never before
this
 area is developed.
Such
 positions like couriers, taxi drivers or salesmen are always in demand. These posts don't need special education and are paid quite well
thus
 look very attractive for
people
 without work experience or enough qualifications.
Secondly
,
cities
 contain the best educational institutions. Students, parents of school-age children want to live in a place with
such
 an advantage. In sum, there is an objective reason to live in
cities
.
However
, overpopulation in
cities
 is a risky thing. It causes various difficulties. One of them is overpriced houses.
People
 couldn't buy their own housing for decades and needed to live in a rented one. Another problem is strong damage to the environment due to the concentration of industrial facilities being very high. Air pollution and waste are doing life in
that
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those
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places
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 extremely hard. To solve these problems governments should develop places with lower populations and stimulate
people
 to live in the rural areas. In conclusion,
although
 the intention of
people
 to moving in
cities
 has particular reasons, hazards of it much bigger and folks around the globe should change
this
 situation
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