Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, playing outdoor games is very crucial for keeping us fit. Regarding

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point, many individuals argued that enhancing

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of gaming can develop people's

health

while others believe that solely playing sports can not do it, at the same time we need to perform others like consuming

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balance

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diet and proper medical

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both views with

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further

. On the

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hand,gaming is a form of exercise and it has a lot of

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to keep us healthy. In

this

view,

excercises

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exercises

enhance our immunity,

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lubricant

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our joining, keep our mind alert and decrease our obesity

also

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,

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of my maternal aunts with whom I stayed three years because of my study purposes,

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suffered a plethora of

health

issues

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as diabetes, high blood sugar,

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chronic

liver disease because of her overweight

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she was almost 106 kg. So, he consulted

a doctors

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and he suggested

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to

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play outdoor games like spinning rope,running,swimming, badminton and so on.

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this

suggestion, she used to

doing

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it and after

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month she felt fresh than before and as well as her age declined by 10 kg.

On the other hand

, consuming healthy food

play

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a significant role

for

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developing people’s

health

. Good food which we called

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diet provides people's necessary vitamins, protein, minerals and without getting these

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properly no

one

can improve their

health

.

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article just

few

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months ago where some overseas researchers mentioned that 80% of

peoples

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are not aware

taking

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a vitamin

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vitamin

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.

As a result

,

individiuals

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individuals

will face visual disability before their early fifties. In conclusion, there is no doubt that enhancing the scope of playing sports is very crucial as well as people’s need to maintain a proper diet and lifestyle for staying healthy and fresh.