Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People have different views about
issues
which are related to the environment whether the risk of extinction of some kind of
plants
and
animals
are the most important concern while some others believe that there may be some other vital dilemmas. In my ,opinion both views are correct and all the
issues
are related to each other but I believe that some other problems are more important. These days, the earth is at greater risk of extinction of plant and animal species by humans overhunting and farming which destroy
plants
breeds. Some people are concerned with these activities and bring up some population to protect from
animals
and
plants
.
On the other hand
, there are some other
issues
perhaps even more important than other groups concerned about them, like global warming.
This
issue
is caused by increasing the industries and releasing smoke exhaust and greenhouse gases. Icebergs will be melted by increasing weather temperature and it can face human's lives and
also
animals
and
plants
endanger. Another
issue
which nowadays exists is water pollution that has so many drawbacks. It destroys marine life and many fishes are polluted by rubbishes like plastics and petroleum pollution. That
issue
has many drawbacks for humans
for example
they lose one of the main sources of food. ,
Also
the food chain will be eliminated by water pollution. In the conclusion, losing some
plants
and
animals
is an important
issue
for the environment but it seems to me and many others, other kinds of
issues
are much more important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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