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Education is the single most important factor for a developing country. Do you agree or disagree

#education #factor #country
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In
this
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 modern scenario,the topic of teaching is controversial.it is very imperative to enhance a country's
economy
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,
therefore
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 pedagogy is the only option for
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 enlarging country.I strongly accord with
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 statement.
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 essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,there are numerous benefits of having good instruction.
firstly
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,
tution
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tuition
 facilitates knowledge about the outer world,it will assists to ameliorate the conditions of nation's facilities in terms of residential amenities as well as infrastructure.
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,teaching provisions bring more literate
people
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 because illiterate individuals do not know how to enlarge nation's
economy
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.
consequently
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,
rapidly
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 growing number of jobs for
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people
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in
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 the globe.
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,a region is filled with competition among the public.
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,why
education
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 is the most important segment is that some nations are still developing nations due to lack of
education
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,countries like the US and the UK
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with
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more literate multitudes because
people
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 are aware
about
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 the pedagogy.
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,countries like
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India is still enlarging region because of the reduction in the pedagogy importance. On another hand,without proper
schooling
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 we can not achieve our destinations as every field
filled
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 with heavy competition among highly educated
people
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,every person
tend
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 to become high positions like
doctor
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a doctor
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,engineering and lecturer.In order to,reach that post everyone should be educated.eventually,
country's
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economy
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also
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 increases.these days,
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 many institutions are ready to teach subjects,many individuals
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 tend to utilize those facilities.
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,
county's
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economy
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 might be in the
last
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 position. To conclude,
education
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 plays a vital role in everyone's life to get success,so multitudes who are educated should tell the significant benefits of teaching to other
people
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 who are not educated.
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,not only
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education
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enables
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 knowledge but
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 ensures many facilities to survive in the world.
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