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In the future. nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, even some people still keep the habits of reading
books
 and magazines, others think that while hard copies of
books
 or daily magazines will be disappeared, people will tend to read something free online. I firmly agree with
this
 point of view because printing articles will bring some disadvantages. In
this
 essay, I will support my ideal with some analysis.
Firstly
, due to the development of technology information especially the internet, people are easy to access much online information
that is
  a quite convenient and time-saving way.
Besides
 that, they can get not only the reviews or any arguments but
also
 find the relevant information about those subjects.
For example
, with smartphones, laptops or portable technology stuffs young generations can search and read the news everywhere they want
such
 as on the train, in the coffee shop ... but they don't need to go to bookshops to buy
books
 or press.
Secondly
, producing
books
 or journals are not good for the environment. Pulp and
paper
 which are used for
books
 are manufactured from raw materials that are woods. Many trees need to be cut down for
paper
 manufacturing. Rubbish emission from factories if it is not well-organized, will cause air pollution. In some recent studies, pulp and
paper
 generate the
third
 largest amount of industrial air, water and land emissions in Canada. That's why having a safe pulp and
paper
 mill will cost a lot of funds. While the consumers reduce, investing a big amount to print out
books
 or newspapers is not practical. In conclusion, with the bad effects on the environment and the high cost of printed
books
 and newspapers, the way to choose e-
books
 is an upward trend because of the convenience on time and money savings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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