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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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In
this
 twenty-
first
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century
, the globe is dominated by computers and technological aspects.
As a result
, it is opined that majority of the academic activities
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must
 be
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digitalized
digitized
 which includes
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teaching
 methods. Personally,
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 believe
this
 is not a necessary factor
however
, it creates various problems
to
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 scholars as well as
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 tutors. It is certainly true the innovation of high-tech schooling method is
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the initial
 step for the country's development as the school children are the significant part of the future. In fact, it makes more
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convenient
 to students by providing only one or two
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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 related to study. In developed countries
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such
 as Switzerland
for instance
, they only allowed kids to have
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tablet
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 as their study material.
This
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 a rise
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not only in that nation's pride, but
also
 beneficial to the citizens.
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Nevertheless
, I think it is not practically possible for countries like India to be
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modernized
 in the
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field
 of education.
That is
,
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 choose paper books over e-books since the people are more comfortable with the former than the latter.
Additionally
, children view materials used for studies as a source
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 entertainment. To be specific, they misuse
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mobile
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moble
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mobile
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 phones for WhatsApp, Facebook and Instagram rather than concentrating
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 Mathematics or Science. Apart from
this
, prolonged usage of these laptops or mobile phones arises problems
such
 as headache,
migrine
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migraine
 or even brain tumour.
Therefore
 the
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 issues still act as drawbacks regarding
computeristion
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computerisation
computerization
 in classrooms. To conclude, even though modern technologies related to schools define
greatness
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 of that particular country, everything computer-based brings struggles to the pupils in some countries.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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