You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his performance - give details of your musical activities - explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Melika, I have been a big fan of you for many years since you released your
first
album. From that time, I have been waiting so long for your concert to be held in my city. A couple of days ago, I was very happy that you were going to perform in Paradise Concert Hall. I can truly say that night was one of the best nights of my entire life. During your singing, I could not bear the suspense while I was singing with you word by word.
In addition
, It had
such
a lasting impression on me that I definitely attend your
next
concert wherever it is. I would like to share with you that I am pursuing my dream to be a professional guitarist like you. To be honest, I have been playing the guitar for six months after your
last
album in which you played it outstandingly, and made me interested in
this
amazing musical instrument. For
this
reason, I honestly think you can help me to hone my skill in your classes even though you have many apprentices.
Therefore
, I would like to kindly ask you to put my name in one of your classes. I am very much looking forward to hearing from you very soon. Yours sincerely, John
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  • inspirational
  • vocal range
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