You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his performance - give details of your musical activities - explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Melika, I have been a big fan of you for many years since you released your

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album. From that time, I have been waiting so long for your concert to be held in my city. A couple of days ago, I was very happy that you were going to perform in Paradise Concert Hall. I can truly say that night was one of the best nights of my entire life. During your singing, I could not bear the suspense while I was singing with you word by word.

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a lasting impression on me that I definitely attend your

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concert wherever it is. I would like to share with you that I am pursuing my dream to be a professional guitarist like you. To be honest, I have been playing the guitar for six months after your

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album in which you played it outstandingly, and made me interested in

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amazing musical instrument. For

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reason, I honestly think you can help me to hone my skill in your classes even though you have many apprentices.

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, I would like to kindly ask you to put my name in one of your classes. I am very much looking forward to hearing from you very soon. Yours sincerely, John

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

stellar performance
captivating
musical prowess
talent
repertoire
collaboration
mentorship
resonate
aspiring musician
composition
rendition
inspirational
vocal range
harmonize
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