Write a letter to your friend inviting Him /her to a music concert. Please say. -Where and when does the concert start? - What type of music will be played there? Why do you think your friend will enjoy it

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Dear John , Hello, hope you are in the best of health and spirits I am glad to inform you that a music concert is going to happen in my hometown

week to which you are warmly invited. For the

last

2 years, our society is organising a fair in sector 17 in the month of November where multiple events attract people's attention.

This

time musical show will

also

be performed on 25 November at night. It will be for 2 hours from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm and ample of music types will be played there

such

as classical, rock, hip-hop and folk songs . Your happiness will be on the top of the hills when I will tell you the name of singer , who is coming to perform there which is none another than Amrinder Gill, a legend of music industry and your favourite singer. I know since your childhood you are dreaming to meet him but did not get chance yet

therefore

, you should come to

this

event as you will have a great time. I assure you will be on cloud nine to be audience. Hope you will surely come to

this

event. Pay my regards to uncle and aunt. With Love Ritu

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