Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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should be though by their
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how to
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citizens, while others think that they should learn
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at school.
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essay argues that
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teachers are role models in our
society
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and can persuade
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to be good
people
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,
parents
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have the main responsibility for teaching moral
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at
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. On the one hand,
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the teacher
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can positively influence their pupils if they teach
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how to be good
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is because, education in schools can be
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on teaching good
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,
values
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, and attitudes.
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, in Venezuela,
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the government
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set a subject named “Good citizens” where students are though about good
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,
values
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and attitudes in today Venezuelan
society
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.
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,
this
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essay believes that
parents
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are responsible for educating
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at
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about
moral
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and
values
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. On the order hand,
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should teach their
children
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values
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at
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because they are responsible for educating their offspring.
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is because
children
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spend more hours with their
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at
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and they need to teach
children
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values
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that allow them to be good
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.
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,
children
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are though at school about mathematics, literature, science, and teachers do not have enough time to do
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.
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, in Colombia Christian
parents
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teach
children
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at
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believes
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such
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as honesty,
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, they become
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member
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of
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apply
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society
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. I believe that if
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want a better
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, they must spend time
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children
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to be good
people
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. In conclusion, despite teaching
values
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at schools is possible and recommendable,
children
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are influence
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mainly
from
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parents
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at
home
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • role models
  • moral values
  • social norms
  • structured environment
  • cooperation
  • respect
  • communal responsibilities
  • decision-making
  • societal integration
  • consistent messages
  • cultural expectations
  • complementary roles
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