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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

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Some
people
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 believe that let
children
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 to make their own choices on daily matters has possible to result in a society of selfish adults. Others think
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 important for
kids
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 to make
decisions
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 about things that affect them. I will discuss both statements and give my opinion.
Firstly
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, some
people
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 convince that if
parents
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 satisfied
children
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’s every desires and requirements
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 as food, clothes or
toys
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,
children
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 will become extreme selfish after grew up.
For example
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, some
parents
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 allowing
children
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 could having as much
toys
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 as they desiring. Many family had
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 experience:
children
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 cry and scream for new
toys
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. Most of the family wanted to end the annoying crying, some
parents
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 use
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 opportunity on try to build a conversation with their
children
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, and solve the problem without bought a new toy.
By contrast
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, some family will try to comfort and please
kids
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 with straightforward bought new
toys
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 eventually.
However
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,
this
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 might be result as a
children
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 spoiled phenomenon: some
children
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 knew if they started crying,
parents
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 will satisfied all their needs.
Thus
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,
this
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 turns out made a bad cycle that
parents
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 have to give everything that
children
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 desire.
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, after those spoiled
children
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 grew up, they might become some individuals that selfish and trying to let everyone whose surrounding them do the same thing just as their
parents
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 did precious.
On the other hand
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, Some
people
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 think, if
children
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 can make
decisions
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 by themselves, it is significant for their future developing.
For instance
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, some
children
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 have the problems on confident and showing represent theirs wishes. In
this
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 case,
parents
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 and instructors should guide
kids
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 to build confidence by themselves, and not fear of speak out theirs desires and emotion ideas to other individuals and try to make
decisions
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 by themselves.
As a result
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,
this
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 will extreme principal to
children
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 for their early psychologist developing and health confident mental evolving. To sum up, in my opinion, I think
people
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 shouldn’t satisfied everything
children
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 need, it might cause the
children
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 spoiled phenomenon.
However
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,
parents
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 could give the things that
children
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 wanted in some special days
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 as birthday. Or use the gift that
kids
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 want as reward when they achieved good results in school.
On the other hand
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, I completely agree with the good education is sometimes let
children
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 to make the
decisions
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 by themselves that will support
kids
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 a good confident environment in daily life.

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