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The process diagram describes the function of producing the goods which
is
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leather
, there are ten stages of
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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step
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. Overall,
the
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animal skin is the main raw material for producing
the
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leather
 products and the final goods are
leather
 handbags, balls and shoes for mankinds' purpose. According to the diagram illustrates, the animal skin is dried by using the hanger,
this
 is the
first
 step for production functions. After that, these dried skins are moved to the factory by the vehicle and the fourth phase of
production
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 process is washing dried skins by using water and lime.
Then
, these skins are soaked in the tank of lime and these are
flattening
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 by the machines. The sixth phase of soaking in the huge tub of water, vegetable matters. polishing is the seventh stage of
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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 step, after that, these polished materials are carried to the
leather
 manufacture company by the vehicle. The final stage of
manufacturing
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 function is the factory
produces
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the
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adorable
leather
 goods for humankinds' purpose.
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