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Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over- enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child's education?

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We know that every people need encouragement during their life ,especially academy years. But some
parents
 can not encourage their
heir
 and give tension. As a
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 a negative effect on their
parents
. Most
parents
 think that putting too much strength on their
heir
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.But I think that it is not the correct idea. Because
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 a bit support and encouragement at their academy and discipline. If offspring can not take attention to their
parents
 ,
this
 may impact their studies. Absolutely, we can say
heir
's schooling and
behaviour
 depend on parent's attitude to their offspring. Our encouragement gives our
scion
 confidence.
Therefore
 they can reach their aims. On the other side, some offspring need strength. Because their family atmosphere requires
this
 attitude.
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 why some
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 a strict attitude from their
parents
 during their faculty scholarship. interactions bad influence them might change their
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 and studies.
This
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bad
behaviour
 offspring. So it belongs to
heir
's
behaviour
 In conclusion, I think that in training every parent
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 a great role for their
scion
. Because
parents
 should give support not burden to their
children
 when they need help. In
this
 ,way we can gain our intention by seeing our
children
's achievements. Oppositely, if we limit our
children
, their studies and
behaviour
 may change bad side. That's why
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 we should focus on our
children
 when they study at school.
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