The best way to solve world’s environmental problem is increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion?

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Nowadays, owing to the problem is enhancing the number of world’s environmental problems that become huge issues in many countries around the world.Some

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argue that the best method to help the environmental problem is to increase the value of fule,while others hold the opposite point of view.I personally disagree with

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,there are still plenty of measures we can take to reduce our impact on the environment.

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the number of

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is rapidly growing.

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situation can be controlled by increasing gas prices.

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people

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still need to buy,drive their own

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in life days.

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, fuel consumption is one of the many activities that cause pollution.

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,traffic congestions causing serious pollution problems like carbon monoxide is part of greenhouse gases that contribute to global warming.

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,there are still plenty of measures to reduce our impact on the environment.

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,the government should take necessary actions to improve infrastructure and public transportation,

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as developing better roads, improving timetables for buses or trains to operate on time so

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will encourage to use them than their own

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,impose high taxes on personal

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. To illustrate,

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in Singapore hardly can own their own car because it is high taxes but their public transportation standards are in good condition so no one is complaining about not owning a vehicle. In conclusion, environmental issues can be controlled to a certain limit by increasing coat of fule.

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,the government should improve infrastructure and impose high taxes on drivers and those who are concerned about gas consumption.

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Topic Vocabulary:

disproportionately affect
renewable sources
solar energy
equity in environmental policies
exacerbating social inequalities
incentivizing
subsidies
strict regulations
industrial emissions
sustainable local production
carbon footprints
punitive measures
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