The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young peopl living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems

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There is no doubt that living in a metropolitan city gives accessibility to a lot of things, but

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comes with a price. In

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essay, I will discuss the difficulties today's generation faces and how they can overcome

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, the major issue is air pollution. As big cities are expanding in terms of facilities and opportunities, more and more people are migrating from towns which is increasing the population.

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, there is an excess number of private vehicles which leads to high AQI.

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, a city like Bangalore in India has the highest AQI

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reason.

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problem can be solved by using more public transport and encouraging work from home concept.

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, the local authorities should come up with a proposal to make sure that at least 20% of the society is covered with trees as it aids in reducing dust particles.

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, major cities are facing challenges

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fresh

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to their residents.

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is because the limited

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is not enough to cater for people which results in the

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bill going up. To illustrate,

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Government's survey, it is found that every year the level of

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groundwater

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water

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is decreasing.

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issue can be addressed by using

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mindfully.

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, for bathing, we can use a bucket

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of a shower, and the kitchen's

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wastewater water

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can be used in the garden again. In conclusion,

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there are troubles living in fast-growing places in terms of clean air and

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crisis, if youngsters do little on their part, we can surpass them and live happily and sustainably.

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task achievement

Try to elaborate a bit more on the consequences of air pollution and water scarcity to make your points more compelling.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next. For instance, a linking sentence between the discussion of air pollution and water scarcity could improve flow.

coherence cohesion

The essay has a clear and concise introduction and conclusion, which helps provide a sense of completeness.

task achievement

You provided specific examples, like the situation in Bangalore and water usage tips, making your arguments more concrete.

coherence cohesion

Main points are well-organized in separate paragraphs, making it easier for the reader to follow your argument.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

270 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

high cost of living
financial stress
affordable housing
population boom
job market saturation
underemployment
mental health
stress, anxiety, and depression
subsidies
tax rebates
minimum wage
affordable housing
entrepreneurship
skill development programs
diverse range of industries
mental health facilities
community networks
isolation
urban residents

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The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young peopl living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems

Your opinion

Recent research has confirmed that ‘human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life’. Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

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