The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young peopl living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems
There is no doubt that living in a metropolitan city gives accessibility to a lot of things, but
this
comes with a price. In Linking Words
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essay, I will discuss the difficulties today's generation faces and how they can overcome Linking Words
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Firstly
, the major issue is air pollution. As big cities are expanding in terms of facilities and opportunities, more and more people are migrating from towns which is increasing the population. Linking Words
As a result
, there is an excess number of private vehicles which leads to high AQI. Linking Words
For instance
, a city like Bangalore in India has the highest AQI Linking Words
for
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this
reason. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
problem can be solved by using more public transport and encouraging work from home concept. Linking Words
Also
, the local authorities should come up with a proposal to make sure that at least 20% of the society is covered with trees as it aids in reducing dust particles.
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Secondly
, major cities are facing challenges Linking Words
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in providing
water
to their residents. Use synonyms
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water
is not enough to cater for people which results in the Use synonyms
water
bill going up. To illustrate, Use synonyms
according to
Government's survey, it is found that every year the level of Linking Words
ground
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groundwater
water
is decreasing. Use synonyms
This
issue can be addressed by using Linking Words
water
mindfully. Use synonyms
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, for bathing, we can use a bucket Linking Words
instead
of a shower, and the kitchen's Linking Words
wastewaterwater
can be used in the garden again.
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although
there are troubles living in fast-growing places in terms of clean air and Linking Words
water
crisis, if youngsters do little on their part, we can surpass them and live happily and sustainably.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Try to elaborate a bit more on the consequences of air pollution and water scarcity to make your points more compelling.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next. For instance, a linking sentence between the discussion of air pollution and water scarcity could improve flow.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear and concise introduction and conclusion, which helps provide a sense of completeness.
task achievement
You provided specific examples, like the situation in Bangalore and water usage tips, making your arguments more concrete.
coherence cohesion
Main points are well-organized in separate paragraphs, making it easier for the reader to follow your argument.
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