Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots, what is your opinion?
It is believed that artificially intelligent
robots
will eventually replace the entire workforce. Use synonyms
While
it is possible for mundane work to be carried out by Linking Words
robots
, I believe certain jobs requiring human touch will still be performed by people. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss some of the tasks that will and will not be taken over by automation.
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Due to
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robots
' precision ability, they have the capacity to carry out unskilled work. In production, the use of Use synonyms
machines
has helped companies to cut costs, save time and increase profitability across many industries. Use synonyms
For instance
, in the electronic industry, microchips Linking Words
are
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have been
pre-dominantly
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predominantly
machines
for many years and can hardly be seen involving human labour. Use synonyms
This
is because the line of work usually involves a high level of precision and speed which people may not be able to keep up with. Linking Words
Furthermore
, some other industries that automation can potentially take over include the military, Linking Words
as well as
food and beverages.
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Although
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machines
are programmed to be highly intelligent, certain tasks requiring human skills, Use synonyms
such
as mental intelligence and human interaction cannot be performed by them. Linking Words
For example
, doctors and surgeons are positions that can only be carried by highly-trained individuals. Linking Words
While
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machines
can be precise in how they operate, they are unable to interact with patients or account for the patients' feedback during a doctor's appointment session. Use synonyms
As a result
, misdiagnosis can happen and is detrimental to the patients.
In conclusion, even though the use of Linking Words
robots
will increase significantly to increase productivity in the future, human intervention in certain areas is still essential to ensure adequate human interaction. In consequence, certain jobs will still be dominated by people.Use synonyms
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