University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Give reason for your answer and include relevant example from your experience or knowledge
Nowadays, across the world, the craze for studying abroad is very much high. Students who can afford to go abroad want to
study
overseas in order to build their bright future. Some people think that there are lots of advantages whereas the opposition thinks that the disadvantages of studying in foreign are more. I support the former view and in the following essay
we will discuss the reasons for both views.
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Firstly
, some people believe that,
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apply
study
abroad may require innumerable funds in the account and that is
actually right. They think that a person who goes for study
outside the home country
will eventually become anti-social as there will be no social life as he or she would not have a chance to meet and greet any of the relatives. Some part of the society is under impression that if their children go abroad they will spoil as no one will be there to look after them.
On the other side, if we talk about advantages; they are having an upper hand over the disadvantages. Students who prefer to study
overseas are more active and highly independent. For example
, they don't know how to cook when they are in their home country
as someone is always there to keep an eye on them, However
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initially
they can't afford cook so eventually they will learn things. After moving overseas, individuals will learn the culture of the respective country
, they can meet new mankind speaking different languages.
To conclude, the advantages take precedence over the disadvantages in many ways. As discussed earlier, if students will have an opportunity to go to a different country
for study
, they should definitely go for it and never miss that chance.Submitted by snehaldesai05 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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