On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the company – describe the item lost – explain how you lost it – tell the insurance company what you would like them to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir ,
I am writing smile character on its back . It is small in size with waterproof material . I
this
letter to inform you that I lost my Linking Words
laptop
Use synonyms
while
I was travelling with my children to Mexico for my Linking Words
friend
wedding .
It is Change noun form
friend's
white
Add an article
a white
color
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colour
laptop
and the name of the company is Samsung . The cover of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
laptop
is blue withAdd an article
the laptop
a laptop
Correct article usage
a
also
taken travel insurance with it and I have printed Linking Words
as well as
an email copy of my insurance .
I Linking Words
rembered
that I Correct your spelling
remembered
seperated
my personal items Correct your spelling
separated
in
different Change preposition
into
bag
and we were struggling to find a room for them ,so , Fix the agreement mistake
bags
air
hostess helped me to put my personal belongings into the corner of the plane .Correct article usage
the air
However
, When I arrived at the baggage area Linking Words
then
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i
was not able to find my personal bag which Change the capitalization
I
contain
the most valuable item Wrong verb form
contained
that
was my Correct pronoun usage
which
laptop
.
I would really appreciate Use synonyms
if
you Correct pronoun usage
it if
can
contact your staff and Wrong verb form
could
start
inquire about Add the particle
start to
this
item . I have important work information Linking Words
in
Change preposition
on
this
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laptop
which Use synonyms
i
need to submit Change the capitalization
I
my
boss for Change preposition
to my
company's
deal . Correct article usage
the company's
According to
the insurance policy , I can claim for personal item value anytime if your team Linking Words
Add a missing verb
is unsuccessfull
unsuccessfull
Correct your spelling
unsuccessful
unsuccessfully
to find
it within 24 hours window.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal KaurChange preposition
in finding
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Spelling
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Organization
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Punctuation
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Description
Your letter vividly describes the lost item, making it easier for the reader to understand its importance.
Task Response
You clearly stated what you would like the insurance company to do, which is crucial for achieving the task's objective.
Tone
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