Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

Elderly
people
are often advised to
exercise
routinely by health care providers,
however
, many
aging
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patients couldn’t keep up with their
exercise
tasks.
Boredom
might be the number one reason for
this
laziness. By introducing social elements into
rountine
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routine
tasks, we could help more individuals to stick with their
exercise
schedule.
First
of all, we need to identify the root causes that usually break up
exercise
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routine
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. The
answer
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are
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is
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boredom
and resistance.
Achivement
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Achievement
rarely is given for free and that
apply
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to
exercise
also
. Great health and a body in shape don’t come
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overnight
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over night
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, these are the results of hard work and determination over a period of time.
Alot
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A lot
of us get beaten down by resistance and laziness
everyday
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, our failure is a reminder that we need to stand up and keep fighting the mental battle and the physical challenge at all
time
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times
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.
In addition
to
boredom
stoping
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us from following our
exercise
rountine
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routine
, most
people
often overestimate their effort in
this
challenge. An English University conducted a study on a particular
exercise
activity on all ages,
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out that 70% of
people
participated
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who participated
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in the survey thought that they had
excersiced
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exercised
enough while in
reality
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the data
such
as the amount of time they exercised scientifically proves
otherwise
. In order to promote
effective
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exercise
plan
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we could learn about the patient’s choices and let them choose their
favorite
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activities.
This
flexibility in activities is how we could help them fight
boredom
.
For example
:
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old
people
that I have met love it when I show them my E-bikes, I always
reccomment
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recommend
them to get one so they can freely bike anywhere,
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however
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how ever
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however
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long they want and on any kind of
terrances
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terraces
,
this
is
such
a fun way to
exercise
and
people
would be engaged more.
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that, we are
social
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a social
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creature
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and any
exercise
activities that
attended
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are attended
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by groups could enhance not only our health but
also
our mental state in a positive way.
For example
, an aerobic teacher in my town always hold an
exercise
party in the park every
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and
sunday
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,
this
event has drawn a large group of
people
from young to old to
exercise
, it is fun and it
keep
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people
engaged with
eachother
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each other
. In conclusion, the number problem with elderly
people
not
follow
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following
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through with their
excersice
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exercise
routine is
boredom
and resistance.
By coming
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up with a flexible plan where an individual can work on their
favorite
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favourite
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type
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of exercises
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exercises
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exercise
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can help prolong their interest in the activity. On top of that, adding
social
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a social
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aspect into
exercise
is
also
effective as we are social creatures and like to do things together.
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