Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

Elderly
people
are often advised to
exercise
routinely by health care providers,
however
, many ageing patients couldn’t keep up with their workout schedule.
Boredom
might be the number
one
reason for
this
laziness. By introducing social elements into routine tasks, we could help more individuals
to
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stick with their
exercise
schedule
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.
First
of all, we need to identify the root causes that usually break up an
exercise
routine. The answers are
boredom
and resistance. Achievement rarely is given for free and that applies to
exercise
also
. Great health and a body in shape don’t come overnight, these are the results of hard work and determination over a period of time.
Alot
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A lot
of us get beaten down by resistance and laziness
everyday
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, our failure is a reminder that we need to stand up and keep fighting the mental battle and the physical challenges at all
time
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times
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.
In addition
to
boredom
stopping us from following our workout routine, most
people
often overestimate their effort in
this
challenge. An English University conducted a study on a particular
exercise
activity on all ages,
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out that 70% of
people
participated
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in the survey thought that they had
excersiced
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exercised
enough while in
reality
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,reality
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the data
such
as the amount of time they exercised, scientifically
proves
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otherwise
. In order to promote
effective
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exercise
plan
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we could learn about the patient’s interests and let them choose their
favorite
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favourite
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activities.
This
flexibility in activities is how we could help them fight
boredom
.
For example
:
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old
people
that I have met love it when I show them my E-bikes, I always
reccomment
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recommend
them to get
one
so they can freely bike anywhere,
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however
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how ever
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long they want and on any kind of
terrances
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terraces
,
this
is
such
a fun way to
exercise
and
people
would be engaged more.
Beside
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that, we are social creatures and any
exercise
activities that
attended
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by groups could enhance not only our health but
also
our mental state in a positive way.
For example
, an aerobic teacher in my town always hold an
exercise
party in the park every Saturday and Sunday,
this
event has drawn a large group of
people
from young to old to
exercise
out
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door
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, it is fun and it keeps
people
engaged with
eachother
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each other
. In conclusion, the number
one
problem with elderly
people
not
follow
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through with their
excersice
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exercise
routine is
boredom
. By coming up with a flexible plan,
one
can work on their
favorite
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favourite
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type
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exercises
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exercise
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can
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that can
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help prolong their interest in the activity. On top of that, adding
social
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a social
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aspect into
exercise
is
also
effective as we are social creatures and like to do things together.
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