IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6

In the future. nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
Newspapers
 and
books
 are
areat
Correct your spelling
great
sosourcesof
Correct your spelling
so sources of
 knowledge for every
age
 group. Using electronic
books
 and
newspapers
 has become a controversial issue. Some
people
 believe that in future,
people
 will completely abolish the idea of using printed
books
 and
newspapers
 because every individual can
access
 the materials online and is for free.
However
, I believe there will be a certain number of
people
 who will prefer to use printed versions.
This
 essay is an attempt to address the reasons behind using paper versions in upcoming paragraphs. To embark with, in
this
mmodernworld
Correct your spelling
modern world
,
people
 are more inclined to use technology for every purpose. The students, employees and even
people
 living at home have
access
 to the
internet
 which saves the cost of travelling to the library to shop for buying
books
.
Moreover
, online papers are free of cost,
thus
,
people
 will read online more in future.
In contrast
,
age
 can be a factor that becomes a reason
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
 using printed
newspapers
 and
books
 .
Although
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 it is an era of technology, some
people
 who are in the
age
 group of 50 to 60 years, cannot use electronic papers because of several reasons.
Firstly
,
this
age
 group is not used to technological gadgets,
therefore
 will find it difficult to
access
 electronic copies.
Secondly
, some
people
 live in villages where
internet
access
 is not easy.
For example
, Tasmania has small towns where they have
internet
 services issues.
Therefore
,
people
 try to minimise the utilization of the
internet
.
In addition
 to accessibility, health can be the reason for preferences for paper
books
. The difficulties with
eye sight
Correct your spelling
eyesight
show examples
 increase with
age
, it is easy for older
people
 to read paper
books
 using glasses
instead
 of sitting on the screen for long hours.
Besides
this
, some
people
 prefer to read the
books
 in their hands.
In other words
, having a book in hand gives a feeling of reading and it gives time to
people
 to get off the screens and do other activities. In conclusion, reading is a leisure time activity for some
people
. Though
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 reading on the
internet
 is free of cost and saves time, there are still some
people
 who prefer to read printed
books
 because some of them cannot
access
 them and some have preferences for papers over electronic versions.
Submitted by preetkaur18106 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
What to do next:
Look at other essays: