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In the future. nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Newspapers
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 and
books
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 are
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great
sosourcesof
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so sources of
 knowledge for every
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 group. Using electronic
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 and
newspapers
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 has become a controversial issue. Some
people
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 believe that in future,
people
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 will completely abolish the idea of using printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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 because every individual can
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 the materials online and is for free.
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, I believe there will be a certain number of
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 who will prefer to use printed versions.
This
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modern world
,
people
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 are more inclined to use technology for every purpose. The students, employees and even
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 living at home have
access
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 to the
internet
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 which saves the cost of travelling to the library to shop for buying
books
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.
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, online papers are free of cost,
thus
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,
people
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 will read online more in future.
In contrast
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,
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 can be a factor that becomes a reason
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 using printed
newspapers
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 and
books
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 .
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,
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 it is an era of technology, some
people
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 who are in the
age
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 group of 50 to 60 years, cannot use electronic papers because of several reasons.
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,
this
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age
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 group is not used to technological gadgets,
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 will find it difficult to
access
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 electronic copies.
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, some
people
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 live in villages where
internet
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access
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 is not easy.
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, Tasmania has small towns where they have
internet
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 services issues.
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,
people
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 try to minimise the utilization of the
internet
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.
In addition
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 to accessibility, health can be the reason for preferences for paper
books
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. The difficulties with
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 increase with
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, it is easy for older
people
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 to read paper
books
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 using glasses
instead
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 of sitting on the screen for long hours.
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this
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, some
people
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 prefer to read the
books
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 in their hands.
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, having a book in hand gives a feeling of reading and it gives time to
people
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 to get off the screens and do other activities. In conclusion, reading is a leisure time activity for some
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. Though
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 reading on the
internet
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 is free of cost and saves time, there are still some
people
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 who prefer to read printed
books
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 because some of them cannot
access
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 them and some have preferences for papers over electronic versions.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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