Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in city while other believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both both view and give your opinion.
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one
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from one
other
. Some Correct quantifier usage
another
people
believe that automobile is better
way to travel in cities where is Add an article
a better
the better
other
think that travel by Fix the agreement mistake
others
bicycle
is best
way to transport. In my view, I completely agree with the latter view. Change the article
the best
This
essay will further
elaborated
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elaborate
both
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on both
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and negative Correct article usage
the positive
effect
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effects
this
trend anthers will lead to logical
conclusion.
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a logical
the logical
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with, these are some advantages to travel
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travelling
a
car in Remove the article
apply
urban
area. Add an article
an urban
the urban
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to save time , instead
using Add the preposition
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two
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two-wheeler
wheeler
. Driving Change to a plural noun
wheelers
automobile
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an automobile
also
not a physically stranuous
actively but it Correct your spelling
strenuous
help
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helps
people
to save time and energy. Example
one of my Change preposition
For example
relative
lives far from me, about 10 km, It will take 1 to 2 hours Fix the agreement mistake
relatives
two wheeler
when I go there, but if I Add a hyphen
two-wheeler
use
car
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a car
insted
I can reach there approximately 30 Correct your spelling
instead
minute
. Change to a plural noun
minutes
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another Correct your spelling
Moreover
advantages
is that protect Replace the adjective
advantage
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the environment
environment
condition .mostly Replace the word
environmental
in
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of
rainy
season Add an article
the rainy
people
prefer to use
car
.
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the car
a car
like
to Change the verb form
likes
use
bicycle
. The reason Add an article
a bicycle
the bicycle
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is
are as
. The Correct your spelling
areas
use
of Add an article
the bicycle
a bicycle
bicycle
is Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
the
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apply
beneficial
for our health and environment. Replace the word
benefit
this
is because,
It can need human strength and requires no gasoline and petrol. Remove the comma
apply
Although
, no use
of harmful emission is released to
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into
air
. Add an article
the air
Secondly
, in process of riding , human
burn out excess fat and Fix the agreement mistake
humans
also
release toxic to to
our bodies. Because of these control cities Remove the redundancy
apply
people
fitness and healthier. For instance
, study
showed that Add an article
the study
a study
,
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apply
daily
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a daily
30 minute
cycle ride can mitigate the risk of hypertension, Add a hyphen
30-minute
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diabetes
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liquid
desorbans
.
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desorbs
tyre
is the fastest mode Add an article
the tyre
a tyre
to
transportation to Change preposition
of
use
in city
. Add an article
the city
Bicycle
is the best choice to favourable weather condition and which as the economically efficient and can also
save lot
of money .Change the article
a lot
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