You recently attended a local community event, but you were disappointed with the organization. Write a letter to the event coordinator. In your letter: •describe the problems you experienced during the event •explain how these problems affected your experience •suggest what could be done to improve future events

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to formally express my concern with regard to the community event. I trust your esteemed

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matter promptly, and I am grateful for your consideration. To provide context, I attended a local community event about the traditions of history , which was held on 2nd July 2025 at the city centre. I faced some issues during that occasion,

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as, catering service was not up to the mark,

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parking

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facilities were inadequate.

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matter is significant because it has not only affected my experience but

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had an impact on my health.

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, I suffered from food poisoning owing to poor food quality at the event. In light of the above, I respectfully suggest checking the quality of food beforehand and

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improving the location for better parking facilities for future events. I sincerely appreciate your attention to

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matter. Thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Aayush Upadhyay