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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
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 is the most essential language
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all over the world. Everyone should know
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 for various reasons. There are many ways to learn
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 properly. that's why I
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 about
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 topic I will explain and support my opinion with examples. There are lots of
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 around the world.If we stay there, we find an amount of
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 to know
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 of all,an
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 environment which is helped you to you know
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 well.
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 every sector in your daily life
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 with
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, day by day increasing your level of
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 and one day you are
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proficient in
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.In many
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, we saw the same thing.
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 I strongly believe that
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 is not the only solution to
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 well.Any countries have its own language and culture.
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 people of
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 own language.If every
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of
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 countries do a proper step to know
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. I think every
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 have a great knowledge of
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 in his or her childhood.Of all the
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 colleges and Universities should
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 spoken clubs in their Institution and properly guide of their students.An Oxford University which was surveyed that, a great amount people who was a great knowledge of
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 where
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 is not
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 tongue. In
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 that
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 are designed which is very much potential to learn
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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