A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believe that

animals

should not be tested by

people

, whereas others claim that

animals

are used

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important needs

such

as food and scientific research . I am completely convinced

those

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who believe that

animals

should

used

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to complete human needs.

This

essay will discuss both points of view. On the one hand , those who advocate that

animals

ought not to be tested by

people

promote the idea that they are living beings and have

right

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to exist.

This

is because humans have no moral right to do experiments on

animals

since they are conciliatory and far

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far sighted

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individuals . If

people

conduct experiments on

animals

they lose their human qualities .

As a result

, they will not be able different from

animals

who can not able to think, analyze and perceive information .

However

, in

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consequences

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it is likely that the number of

people

’s death would increase gradually since the lack of nutrition including meat . To illustrate , recent data show that the majority of

people

who ill often was

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vegetarians

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.

On the other hand

,others point

that

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animals

should be used as a primary source

of

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fulfill

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their various needs.

Thus

, animal testing helps to advance medical and scientific knowledge, which is a

considerably

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impact on

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the human’s

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human’s

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health rate.

Furthermore

, many scientists utilize

animals

for their research , like

a

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biology or medical study . It can really help

people

to enhance their knowledge about the

earth

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phenomena and

also

find new medications for helping any

human’s

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disease. A primary example of

this

is

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medical research by Robin Nortel who sum up and conclude to the point that animal meat contains all the vitamins A and B. In conclusion ,

although

some

people

think that

animals

ought

not

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be exploited by

people

, others highlight that it is valuable to use them as the main source of needs . It seems to me that if

animals

use only to accomplish human needs it is likely that we will succeed in

medical

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the medical

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and educational

field

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.