In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, technology plays
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role in
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life.
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with the advancement of technology internet replaces the
books
and other
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material. I agreed with the statement as due to the websites the life is much easier and
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as compared to buying
books
for different studies. Apparently, there are myriads of reasons which will
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further
explain
this
argument .
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first
and foremost , it is easy for students to carry
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a laptop
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laptop
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as they do not need to take
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of
books
.
Secondly
, with the help of different official websites children can learn upgraded material related to their study.
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- in universities at the time of research they can simply visit on education site and get advance knowledge which will
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helpful to get good marks.
Thirdly
, through social media like
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,
twitter
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and
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they can connect with each other and keep themselves up to date and
also
know about the latest news through different posts.
On the other hand
,
internet
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is good as compared to reading
books
or buying newspapers . As in
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some articles related to fashion
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available so children did not like to read
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. Chiefly, if they update newspapers
then
youth can read it in
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interested
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way which will
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further
improve their reading skills and is beneficial for
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in future. In my profound opinion,
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has tremendous benefits but we need to use it in a proper way so that it will not
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effect
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our physical health . We need to set time and parents need to make rules so children can spend
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to
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through
books
and in
this
way the folks can enhance their reading ability.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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