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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#english #language #country
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language
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is consider
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as
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the
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 easiest
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. But for some people, who are not born as the
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english
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 being their mother tongue, it is not as simple as it
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. Not because of its easy 26 alphabets, but because of the
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 that we have to invest
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 it.
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, I strongly agreed
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 the statement that studying the
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 in an
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-speaking country is the best
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one
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 can choose to learn in other ways.
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 of the advantages of studying in
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-speaking
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such
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 as Australia, America, England, etc , is that
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 cheaper than
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 to
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non-English-speaking
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-speaking
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such
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Asia
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. If
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want
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 to study
the
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 with native speakers in
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, they have to attend international school or classes that are owned by native speakers, whose fees are way beyond expensive. For an ordinary man in
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, to work and pay for international school fees is impossible. But still,
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 of
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 from
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 amount of middle-class, attend international schools in
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. While, in those western
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one man
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work
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, even an entry-level job, he can afford a native speaker's
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 class for his
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. Not only
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 helpful financially, but
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 save
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 and help
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 learn faster. As it is
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-speaking
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countries
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,
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 of the
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,
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 will hear the
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language
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 and tend to speak it
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without
 knowing that they did. In fact,
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 have proven
this
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 psychological fact.
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, when students in
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 are attending listening classes and speaking
class
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classes
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 which cost them a huge amount of
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, people in
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-speaking
country
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 will be attending
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 for free.
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, it
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 both
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 and
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, learning
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English
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language
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 in
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English-speaking
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an English-speaking
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 country is not the only way to learn
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language
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 but it is the best and most effective way to study it. It not only save
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 but
also
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time
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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