Some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people’s way of life. Others believe that the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued by certain

people

that the

weather

conditions

impacts

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more on

people

's

lives

than anything else, while a few

dispute

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that, and

instead

suggest that the economy of the surrounding countries in a geographical area has more bearing. In my opinion, I feel that the floods and hurricanes that

results

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from bad

weather

have a greater influence on the

lives

of many.In

this

essay, I will tackle both of these views and give a conclusion.

First

of all,

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terrible

weather

can result in hurricanes, droughts or heavy downpours. These eventualities cause havoc resulting in mass destruction of both life and property.

In other words

, more individuals are affected greatly than can any problem in a country. Take,

for example

, the hurricane Ana reported in the Southern African

region

which damaged countless crops and

lives

of

people

.

This

shows just how devastating climate can be as well as the influence it has on the masses.

On the other hand

, others opine that the economic status of a

region

delivers the greatest impact.

This

is so because once a

region

can not manage to feed and care for its own

people

due to limited finances in the economy,

then

poverty and suffering

occurs

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. To put

this

in perspective, if the global trade in a

region

can not accord its citizens a chance to earn money and grow economically,

then

a lot of

lives

tend to get into poverty.

For instance

, because of its poor international market the Eastern part of Africa experiences more civil wars which

has

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led to millions being affected. Despite

this

being the case, I believe climate change is

the

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major problem for many

lives

. By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my stance that the

weather

should be prioritised as the main problem affecting many

lives

severely. To

this

end, more resources have to be set aside to manage the prevailing conditions.