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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Development is always needed in every aspect including
education
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. The use of the internet for online courses is one of them. Many universities have applied
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 method even before the Covid-19 pandemic that requires
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 to stay at home in quarantine. I believe, one of the goals is to give adequate
education
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 to everyone. In my opinion,
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 development can consider as a positive development. Since now, with online courses,
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 can attend classes everywhere without any barriers.
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, an employee who can not leave for a postgraduate
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 because of his/her work commitment now can attend one of the online courses. Another instance, a disabled person who wants to pursue her/his
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 but shut in their disability now can
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 access the course from their respective places. Notably, in
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 Covid-19 pandemic that happened almost in every country, undoubtedly online learning really help the limitation to meet other
people
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. At
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, some
people
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 doubted
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 way of learning since they think it would not be effective and efficient. Yet, as time goes on,
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 are now inclined to
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 type of learning. Surely, technology is
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 the main part of
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 successful online learning.
People
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 trying to find new technology that can help to make
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 more effective and efficient. To conclude, like many other developments, online learning is
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 at
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, now as
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 can find the correct way to do
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 online learning based on their preference to make
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 successful, online learning even mushrooming everywhere.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distance learning
  • Flexible schedule
  • Virtual classroom
  • Digital resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Synchronous learning
  • Cost-effective
  • Self-paced study
  • Technical difficulties
  • Blended learning
  • Online modules
  • Remote access
  • Student engagement
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