Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Social networking seems to be fashionable among
communities
of all ages, even though sharing some vital information
on these platforms could give rise to unfavourable circumstances. However
, social networking has some positive factors like chances to know other nations' cultures and opportunities to share
information
with others. Hence
, this
writer believes that the advantages of social media will be far away from its disadvantages.
On one hand , some people
share
their vital personal information
, with these social networks without thinking of its dangers. Unfortunately , some information
like date of birth , contact details , information
about family and the favourite political party could be misused by some people
or organisations leading to unnecessary troubles for the account holder. For example
, some people
try to contact these account holders for various purposes like promoting business. However
, most social networks like Facebook , guarantee that the personal information
of their customers will not share
with third
parties.
On the other hand
, social networking is a golden platform to build a relationship with other communities
. Furthermore
, it has given chance to people
to share
their thoughts and information
with others and opportunities to learn the cultures of others . For instance
, a recent survey conducted by one of the leading professors in Sri Lanka have said, communities
have built a bond with each other due to social networking and compared to the last
decade , people
are living much happier mostly due to this
social networking .
In conclusion , although
it can give rise to some bad effects , social networking seems to be popular in all ages of the communities
and , it gives more positive things like flatform to share
their thoughts and information
with each other . Since these factors , this
writer believes that compare to its disadvantages , the advantages of social media will be far away.Submitted by mngldissanayaka on
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