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Many people nowadays do not feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem?

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One of the most notable needs in each society is feeling safe and all governments, authorities even ordinary
people
 try to provide a safe atmosphere in the country. In
this
 essay, I will mention some principal reasons behind
this
 matter and suggest some viable solutions. In recent decades, the sense of security is less than past for some reasons
such
 as increased class differences , increasing poverty in society, a variety of crimes, virtual space and even, recently pandemic corona. All of these reasons on the one hand due is increase poverty and
consequently
 the crime rate. Another reason is a virtual space which shows the luxury lifestyles of some
people
, while most of the
people
 do not have these qualities in their life ,
Also
 internet and online equipment created a new space for financial crimes
such
 that
people
 do not sense of safety even in their home especially when they do an online financial transaction. Solving
this
 problem requires the exact cooperation of the government and the public. The
first
 governments should set strict laws and monitor them , the folk have to do these laws and help to the authorities for find new problem
also
 their solution.
Also
 despite
such
 circumstances and increase unemployment and poverty governments have to consider amounts as grants or pensions for poor
people
.
in addition
, The folks should care for their valuable goods
such
 as jewellery
also
 their credit card password to prevent possible crimes. In conclusion, I believe the sense of insecurity is due to the insecure environment around us. And it is possible to control it by doing some things by the government and
people
.
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