some people say that e-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional use of newspaper and magazines to what extent you agree or disagree.

in the recent decade and with the advancement of technology willing to the traditional method of reading
news
has changed, and new tools
such
as ebooks or online
news
websites have replaced them . In
this
essay, I will discuss
this
issue
then
followed by a reasoned conclusion. In the past, people like to be informed about new happened and
news
around the world. And of course, time of gain
this
information was very important for them. It was the greatest difference between various reporters. So one of the most reasons for tendency online
news
is the speed of release
news
also
their availability,
also
they can gain different perspectives from different
news
resources about one issue. Another reason is technology help to conserve natural resources because we do not need more paper, a survey done by the Australian university has found, for a newspaper page contains two or three pieces of
news
, which have been read by thousand people should
cut
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down at least ten trees , so it has a detrimental effect on the environment.
In addition
, nowadays all of the people only with a smartphone can have a majority of book,
news
, essay and etc, witch the cost of downloading the e-book is very fewer than buy a real fiction.
On the other hand
, finding a trusted website with true
news
is very difficult and important
also
parents always are worried about their children ,especially online books or
news
selected by them. In conclusion, despite the existence of some points, I completely agree with ebooks and online
news
instead
of publishing books and newspapers and destroying many trees.
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