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The most important element in a person’s life is their work. Without a satisfying career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Individuals from different walks of
life
 have manifolds of conundrums when it comes to working stability,
thus
, a crucial aspect in human activity is to have a decent job. Wherein, growth is useless once the performance we have is not satisfying; considering
this
, I somehow do not concur with the idea, but almost entirely I coincide with the notion.
This
 essay will focus on the weight of both views. Focusing on the least apparent side, I oppose
this
 discernment because there is another component like health which is essential to
life
. Inasmuch as, being healthy as a fiddle is paramount for the people to sustain their wellbeing. On the account of recent surveys, individuals that display a healthy mental and physical position has a significance to continue to live. As a corollary, health is considered wealth to some groups of society. On the basis thereof, I accede with the notion because
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 a career is imperative to a person since it is one of the sources of exceptional remuneration to sustain their daily growth. In many ways, if the dominant member of a family is obtaining remarkable revenue, it helped in providing basic needs within the family circle. A household with members having a work
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 is an exemplar of
this
.
Therefore
, they are secure and worry-free due to the fact that they have all the means and support.
Similarly
, a career is a major ingredient that differentiates the prominence in the community.
In other words
, once a person has a well-sustaining task it signifies
above-average
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 level of socioeconomic stature. A remarkable physician working in one of the prestigious hospitals is a cicerone to
this
; while procuring a huge of money they
also
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 labelled as a high person, henceforth, their
life
 is full of meaning and satisfaction. By and large,
this
 essay has presented the reasons why I somewhat vary with the topic which is the other consideration like health is essential to activity, why I almost entirely,
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concede with the idea which is career is
the
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imperative to
source
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the source
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 of remuneration to sustain
life
, and production is a major part when comes to
condition
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 in our society. It can be foreseen that if an individual has a satisfying profession, it has a great impact on their lives and well being.
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