The most important element in a person’s life is their work. Without a satisfying career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of work which was always debatable has now become more controversial as many people

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that it is beneficial while others reject

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notion. In my

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the former proposition appears to be more rational.

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essay will

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ellaborate

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positive and negative

effcets

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of

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trend which will

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lead to

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conclusion. There are myriad of reasons which will explain

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argument but the most

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stem from the fact that if we have

good

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job

then

life is much easier and it will be helpful for everyone to keep their mental health balanced and achieve their goals in their life .

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- IT

student

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always want

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carrier

and gaining that achievement helps to

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the business growth and

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their own needs. Another pivotal aspect of

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argument is that if they have

good

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carrier

then

it has tremendous benefits for their children in their future and they will provide good education to their children and it will help to improve the economic condition of the state as the new generation is the future of the upcoming world.Needless to say , all these merits are good stead .

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, there are some pitfalls that

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this

argument which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

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trend but one of most alarming is that if they have a

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good

carrier

then

their needs will grow more and in

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condition they become more greedy to satisfy ourselves and spend

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of time to get

another jobs

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which will

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increase the gap between their family and their bond will destroy.

Besides

, they will try to develop more business and at the

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they must

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to develop the

carrier

more and more which will

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their physical as well as mental health.

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government

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in

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as 60%

people

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are

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in depression after getting so obsessed with their

carrier

. According to the arguments aforementioned , one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of a

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good

carrier

is

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instrumental indeed ,

Nevertheless

, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either. In my profound opinion , everything in excess

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dangerous as

carrier

jobs are good to

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their dreams but limitations are really important.