in recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shipping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

The debate around whether the phenomenon of closing local

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thanks to the changing of individuals' purchasing habits is beneficial or detrimental has raged on recently. I, for one, approve of the idea that it would be disastrous.

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essay delves into the issue and provides logical reasons before drawing a conclusion. On the one hand, ceasing the operation of local

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would have negative implications

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and foremost is changing the

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. In terms of

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means that local

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are part of the local communities which are the most important aspects of

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's tradition and

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, so closing the

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eventually makes a distance between them.

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, not only does it cause damaging effects on the

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, but it would

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have bad impacts on the middle-class

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's financial status.

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, many

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will be closed, so many family breadwinners will be unemployed or even broke and

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could not meet their family's needs.

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, due to the globalization fact, closing local

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and changing buyers' behaviour definitely is inevitable, for two reasons they could be even advantageous.

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, purchasing from big shopping centres and malls enables users to have more choices, and as these

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offer competitive prices and bargains, purchasing would be more affordable for the mass of

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people

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especially the young, would be exposed to countless job opportunities,

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as a store manager, accountant, truck driver, and seller. According to statistics which have been published by the New York Times magazine, countries that feature hypermarkets and malls have had at least 60 per cent financial growth. Having taken all into consideration, as far as I am concerned, the demerits of closing local

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outweigh the merits, and it is better to keep them because they are part of our

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.