Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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that studies about

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should only be

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and be under the government’s control while individual organizations

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in. I disagree with

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wise matter and it should be everyone’s interest. While a government can be very powerful, it does not always represent its people’s will. Depending on who are the elite groups that are in charge of a country, if only the government are allowed to carry out

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the knowledge that they discovered could be used in inappropriate intentions

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. North Korea’s leader on banning its people from organizing scientific studies has posed a

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to the nation’s democracy and could

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hinder its intelligent evolution. I believe the knowledge of

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should be a

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and studies are encouraged to be carried out whether by

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of researchers, big

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goverments

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. It should be everyone’s right and interest. The USA

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Space X, Blue Origin and Virgin Galatic companies to join the space race alongside NASA is a significant win for the country. Elon Musk, the father of Space X is a genius CEO, his aim is to bring people far onto Mars while the NASA of the

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is working toward creating a base station on the Moon. In summary, there is a

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that the head commanders of a nation should only be the one who has the power to allow and control

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of people think that the study of

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be legal for private entities as well. It is not

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to leave a vital subject

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