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In a number of countries ,some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on construction new railway lines for very fast trains between cities , others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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Some
people
 think that using a large sum of
money
 to build a new
railway
station
 for trains but other
people
 say that seeing the old
railway
station
 changed and made new.
People
 used the
money
 to build a new
railway
station
 because of the increase in population so the movement of
people
 has
also
 increased so we have to build a new
railway
station
 so that
people
 do not have to worry
however
Add the comma(s)
,however
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,the new
railway
station
 getting higher and launching a train like metro in our country has given full support to the
people
. Some
people
 think that it is true that the old
railway
station
 needs to be improved and replaced with a new one because more
money
 to be used to build a new
railway
station
 so changed the old
railway
station
 and saw the extra
money
 being used in another extra
money
 can be used for other work and a new
railway
station
 can be built do
this other activities
Change the determiner
this other activity
these other activities
show examples
 and some
people
 can be help loss uses the
money
 to make the old
station
 new
Although
,I think that build a new
railway
station
 because the cost is higher as the
railway
station
 is getting old and to see the constructing of the
railway
station
 so that
people
 do not have to worry about it change it and
people
 do not have to worry and time is saved
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