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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

#countries #amount #crime
Committing a
crime
 is one of the horrible evils that still exists in mankind.Any action that is irresponsible and creates unrest in society can be considered a
crime
.There are many kinds of
crime
,
For example
, Hate
crime
 and crimes of vengeance etc.I agree that the
crime
 rate is increasing in the
world
 and I will give my opinion below.
Firstly
, Many offences are committed in anger because
people
 are not able to control their aggression.Many felonies that are committed are associated with bad habits like
,
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drug and alcohol use because
people
 with problems of substance abuse
,
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 are reported not to have control over their body and their feelings.
In addition
 to
this
, Crimes are increasing as
people
 are becoming more and more intolerant, towards other religions, communities etc. I think the solution for
this
 needs to address on many levels.There should be strict laws to stop the abuse of hallucinating substances and citizens, mainly the youth of a country should be educated more regarding
this
 subject.
People
 should start loving other
people
 and respect their traditions. In conclusion, I want to see a
world
 where there is no
crime
 at all and I wish that humans should respect each other so that
this
world
 will be a better place.A
world
 without
crime
 might sound idealistic but I think humans are capable of
this
 and everyone should take social and moral responsibility to achieve
this
 goal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • propensity
  • recidivism
  • deterrent
  • rehabilitative
  • judicial system
  • corruption
  • socioeconomic
  • alienation
  • stigmatization
  • decriminalization
  • enforcement
  • gentrification
  • preemptive measures
  • intervention strategies
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