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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

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It is argued that
computer
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 makes life more convenient or more difficult.In my opinion,
Computers
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 are the most important devices that we have currently and there is a plethora of evidence to prove that.
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, We can do a lot of work with
computers
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 very easier than our hands.
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, every company needs to maintain their documents every single day and
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 very difficult when we used our hands but with a
computer
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, we can manage all documents very clear and well organized. For Instant, some companies need to make daily progress sheets, daily expenses, staff attendants etc. If they make that documents with their own hand, they need more
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 and huge staff for their paper works but with a
computer
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, they only need to pay one person who operates the
computer
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 and small
time
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 to put the information to relevant places.Because of that, they can save their money and
time
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.
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, there are so many applications we can use for our communications and with
computers
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, we can use all of them to communicate.
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, Now we are living in a very busy world and we do not have much
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 to communicate with our relatives, our clients, friends and every people who live in a world at any
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.
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 recently, we are facing a very dangerous virus and we can not meet everyone because it is too harmful to our health but nowadays, everything goes online and we have so many ways to contact people with
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 and it saves our
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 and health. In conclusion, we can do our paperwork very easier and more correctly with
computers
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. The other thing is we can meet everyone online due to
computer
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 applications. Overall we can spend our life very easier with
computers
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.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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