in the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?

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in the coming
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,the world would be ensured without operators in all types of
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,so in that vehicle,there will be only
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who are travelling without any help of another person.according to me,the benefits will be higher than demerits.
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essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,there are ample benefits of using driverless automobiles.
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and foremost,the public can reach their destination within time without getting late as upcoming development may be faster compared to the human drivers.
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,the main significant advantage to
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a reduction
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in the road
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because technology is expert in driving instructions.
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,according to the survey,these days,the number of
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been increasing day by day due to the negligence of
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in driving as they
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to
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with others while driving,
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it leads to decrease concentration levels towards the driving,so
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,other advantages of using driverless motor
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are not only reduce
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the traffic congestion but
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reduce
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the
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pollution.
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,driving will become eco-friendly
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all
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. on another hand,there are some drawbacks to
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,it would be more difficult to purchase fully developed motors
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groups because of the high cost.
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,awareness of
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about driving rules can be declined.
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,multitudes may not have driving skills which are very imperative to commute for shorter distances.
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,
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who are below poverty can not purchase these
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of
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,so they should use only driver
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,
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they should know the traffic rules to move for shorter distances. To conclude,every coin has both sides.the pros are higher than the cons to
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trend.the advantages are declined in pollution,traffic and
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.the demerits are expensive and lack of skills.everyone should be careful while driving whether it is a driverless car or a with
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the driver
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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